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Okay! Ha! Ha!
In my case I like Ironman ;)
Enjoy being Spiderman, Adam!
I want to be a spiderman.
>>I want to be Spiderman.
He can fly with spidet web.
>> He can fly using his spider web.
He flies in building forest.
>>He flies in a forest of buildings.
It looks very fun.
>> It looks fun.
When I watched that movie first, I really envied him because He can enjoy beautiful view at the top of the empire state building.
>>When I watched that movie for the first time, I really envied him because he could enjoy the beautiful view at the top of the Empire State Building.
Then, watching beautiful America view became my dream.
>>Then, seeing the beautiful America became my dream.
So I want to be a spiderman.
>>Therefore, I want to be Spiderman
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