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2015-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Spending time on social media effects on our minds alot.. Sometimes it is good to know each other and have defferent type of peple however so much information makes us confused and sometimes it makes not to judge the things rightly. Social media has strong power that we can imagine.. We need to use it rightly. 1. They usually spend their holidays in mountains. 2. Los Angeles has the ideal climate. 3. This is the best Mexican restaurant in the country. 4. I can’t live on 500 dollars a month. 5. Someone call the policeman!

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Hi, Miss [이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion. i really appreciate it. ^^ I agree, social media has a very strong power that if it is not used correctly, it can end with devastating results. Sometimes, when I browse my Facebook account, I learn information that I have no right to know. And I think it is embarrassing sometimes, when people share too much information on Facebook. So, I usually post something encouraging or something funny, but I avoid posting something personal. ^^ I\'m looking forward to seeing you in class! T. Anne   Spending time on social media effects on our minds alot.. >> Spending time on social media affects our mind a lot.Sometimes it is good to know each other and have defferent type of peple however >> Sometimes. it is good to know how others are doing, and meet new types of people. However,so much information makes us confused and sometimes it makes not to judge the things rightly. >> So much information confuses us and sometimes causes us not to judge things rightly. Social media has strong power that we can imagine.. >> Social media has such a strong power, something that is hard for us to imagine.We need to use it rightly.>> Correct!1. They usually spend their holidays in mountains. >> Correct!2. Los Angeles has the ideal climate. >> Correct!3. This is the best Mexican restaurant in the country. >> Correct!4. I can’t live on 500 dollars a month. >> Correct!5. Someone call the policeman! >> Correct!

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