homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
Oh, I am so sorry about that line. It was supposed to be for one of my students who is going to China this week. I am so sorry.
Yes, sometimes the world of fashion also confuses me. Sometimes I see models wearing ridiculous clothes and people call it art.
All I can think of is that it is such a waste to spend time creating clothes that cannot be worn,
Also, they sometimes set such impossible figures for young women to see.
I am just glad that I can eat what I want without thinking too much about my waistline. ^^
Again, I am so sorry for that error, Miss [이름].
I will see you in class! ^^
T. Anne
I got this line in my feedback..
>> Correct!
\"Enjoy your time in China. Don\'t let one setback get you down. ^^\" Is this really for me?^^;
>>Correct!
I am confused with the meaning...hehe maybe it is a mistake..right?
>> Correct!
I am not into fashion people..
>> I am not into fashion models.
Their fashion and looking is good..but these are just ideal for me..
>> Their fashion and their appearance is good, but they are just ideal for me.
and sometimes I don\'t really understand about their world of the fashion.. hehe^^;
>> And sometimes, I don\'t really understand the world of fashion, hehe^^;
See you soon!!
>> Correct!
1. Don\'t be cruel to him.
>> Correct!
2. I\'m not being cruel! I\'m always nice to him.
>> Correct!
3. I\'m furious ( = very angry) with him for doing this!
>> Correct!
4. She\'s not worried about her test.
>> Correct!
5. Your brother is really good at tennis.
>> Correct!
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