Homework

Happy Thursday, Erine! It is already Thursday and our wonderful weekend is approaching. Do you have a special plan for this coming weekend? In my case, I need to arrange my stuff at home. There is no place to put my feet in my house because of movement. When it comes to yesterday's my whereabouts, I went to an amusement park named Everland with my boyfriend in Yongin. That is the most famous amusement park here in Korea and that was my first time to visit there in my life. Before I moved into this new house, I couldn't go there because of a long distance, but now, I can go there without any hesitation. I thought if we went there on weekdays, there would not be a lot of people, but that was my mistake. A lot of students were there for their school trip, so we could not go on many rides. Well, it would be my last time to go there. ^^;; That is all for today and see you tomorrow! *Essay I think many doctors still focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients, no matter how rich they are. Here in Korea, many doctors prefer to be a specialist in plastic surgery to make more money. They seem to think that the more they have money, the more they will be happy. As an example, here in Korea, maternity clinic is decreasing and is getting changed to plastic surgery clinic. The reason why this situation happens is because obstetricians have to take a lot of high risks but they can't make money a lot. Moreover, because of our poor economic situation, women are not willing to have their babies. On the other hand, a specialist in plastic surgery can make money easier relatively because appearance is considered as someone's competitiveness in our society nowadays. . Well, we can't help people focus on making profits in this capitalistic society.

Hello and happy Thursday again, [이름]!^^ I was trying not to envy your experience in Everland but I really envy you! I wanted to go to an amusement park!^^ kkk But because you said there were a lot of people, I suddenly changed my mind.kkk Thank you for sharing your experience and answering your homework. I will see you again tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Happy Thursday, Erine! >> Correct It is already Thursday and our wonderful weekend is approaching. >> Correct Do you have a special plan for this coming weekend? >> CorrectIn my case, I need to arrange my stuff at home. >> CorrectThere is no place to put my feet in my house because of movement. >> There is no place for me to step on in my house because of my movement. (**Vocabulary and also you can use the word \"transfer\", replacing the word movement.)When it comes to yesterday\'s my whereabouts, I went to an amusement park named Everland with my boyfriend in Yongin. >> When it comes to my whereabouts yesterday, I went to an amusement park named Everland in Yongin with my boyfriend. (**Sentence pattern: preposition to + noun before the adverb and the names of the places should go together.)That is the most famous amusement park here in Korea and that was my first time to visit there in my life. >> CorrectBefore I moved into this new house, I couldn\'t go there because of a long distance, but now, I can go there without any hesitation. >> Correct I thought if we went there on weekdays, there would not be a lot of people, but that was my mistake. >> CorrectA lot of students were there for their school trip, so we could not go on many rides. >> A lot of students were there for their school trip, so we could not go / enjoy many rides. (Vocabulary use.)Well, it would be my last time to go there. ^^;; >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> Correct*Essay I think many doctors still focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients, no matter how rich they are. >> CorrectHere in Korea, many doctors prefer to be a specialist in plastic surgery to make more money. >> CorrectThey seem to think that the more they have money, the more they will be happy. >> They seem to think that the more money they have, the happier they will be. (Sentence pattern: the more Adjective + Subject +Verb)As an example, here in Korea, maternity clinic is decreasing and is getting changed to plastic surgery clinic. >> CorrectThe reason why this situation happens is because obstetricians have to take a lot of high risks but they can\'t make money a lot. >> The reason why this situation happens is because obstetricians have to take a lot of high risks but they can\'t make a lot of money. (a lot of + noun)Moreover, because of our poor economic situation, women are not willing to have their babies. >> CorrectOn the other hand, a specialist in plastic surgery can make money easier relatively because appearance is considered as someone\'s competitiveness in our society nowadays. >> CorrectWell, we can\'t help people focus on making profits in this capitalistic society. >> Correct