Homework

2015-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them. Explain it in a maximum of 5 sentences. In this year, I will loose my weight more. I'm trying to do squats, the exercise, on everyday. And I will study TOEIC. I haven't study about it before, but after the mid-term, I will try to study, and get an examination of TOEIC. I miss you so much. T_T. Finally I have only 2 exams left! But one of them is too difficult and hard. Anyway see you!!!

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Hello there, [이름]! I miss you so much too! I hope to see you later tonight. I am wondering if you had a good day yesterday. Anyway, just tell me about your exams later and I wish you did well. Thank you for sharing your goals with me. I hope you can accomplish them this year! Good luck!! I will also be here to help you with your goals in studying English, so let\'s do our best together. Okay? :)   Teacher Carmen ^^     HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them. Explain it in a maximum of 5 sentences.In this year, I will loose my weight more. >> I want to lose more weight this year.   I\'m trying to do squats, the exercise, on everyday. >> I\'m trying to do an exercise such as squats everyday.   And I will study TOEIC. >> Correct!   I haven\'t study about it before, but after the mid-term, I will try to study, and get an examination of TOEIC. >> I haven\'t studied it before but I will try to study it after the midterm exam and get a TOEIC test.I miss you so much. T_T. >> Correct!    Finally I have only 2 exams left! >> Finally, I only have 2 exams left!   But one of them is too difficult and hard. >> But one of them is too difficult.   Anyway see you!!! >> Anyway, see you later!

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