Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them. Explain it in a maximum of 5 sentences.
In this year, I will loose my weight more. I'm trying to do squats, the exercise, on everyday. And I will study TOEIC. I haven't study about it before, but after the mid-term, I will try to study, and get an examination of TOEIC.
I miss you so much. T_T. Finally I have only 2 exams left! But one of them is too difficult and hard. Anyway see you!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
I miss you so much too! I hope to see you later tonight. I am wondering if you had a good day yesterday.
Anyway, just tell me about your exams later and I wish you did well.
Thank you for sharing your goals with me. I hope you can accomplish them this year! Good luck!!
I will also be here to help you with your goals in studying English, so let\'s do our best together. Okay? :)
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them. Explain it in a maximum of 5 sentences.In this year, I will loose my weight more.
>> I want to lose more weight this year.
I\'m trying to do squats, the exercise, on everyday.
>> I\'m trying to do an exercise such as squats everyday.
And I will study TOEIC.
>> Correct!
I haven\'t study about it before, but after the mid-term, I will try to study, and get an examination of TOEIC.
>> I haven\'t studied it before but I will try to study it after the midterm exam and get a TOEIC test.I miss you so much. T_T.
>> Correct!
Finally I have only 2 exams left!
>> Finally, I only have 2 exams left!
But one of them is too difficult and hard.
>> But one of them is too difficult.
Anyway see you!!!
>> Anyway, see you later!
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