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2015-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher. I hope you will have a nice halloween day.^^ And, have a great weekend! Some senteces were added to my presentation. Please read and review for me. 1. Keeping hate speech out of the public eye is the best solution for Parekh's multiculturalism? 2. Next, it doesn't meet Parekh's hate speech criteria, but there are already considerable hate speech in private sphere. The problem is that we won't be able to easily distinguish between private and public sphere as time goes by. How would he respond to this situation? 3. Can't we say that his right is violated by internet users?

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Hello Kaylee! I checked your writing below. Good luck with the presentation. :) Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT! I hope you will have a nice halloween day.^^ >> CORRECT! >> Halloween And, have a great weekend! >> CORRECT! Some senteces were added to my presentation. >> CORRECT! >> presentation Please read and review for me. >> CORRECT! 1. Keeping hate speech out of the public eye is the best solution for Parekh\'s multiculturalism? >> CORRECT! 2. Next, it doesn\'t meet Parekh\'s hate speech criteria, but there are already considerable hate speech in private sphere. >> CORRECT! The problem is that we won\'t be able to easily distinguish between private and public sphere as time goes by. >> CORRECT! How would he respond to this situation? >> CORRECT! 3. Can\'t we say that his right is violated by internet users? >> CORRECT!

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