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I went the my friends English class room Halloween party.
I eat many snacks.
I play my friends.
---------------------Happy Halloween Kris teacher!! ^^----------------------
강사 첨삭
Happy Halloween [이름]!
Than you for the greetings! ^^
So, it is good that you enjoyed the party that you
attended.
Did you wear costumes? kikiki.. I am so excited to see you in
Halloween costumes. kiki..
Have a great day ahead.
I will see you in our class.
~~ Teacher Kris
I went the my friends English class room Halloween party.
>> I went to my friend\'s English classs room for the Halloween party.I eat many snacks.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I ate a lot of snacks.I play my friends.>> I play with my friends.---------------------Happy Halloween Kris teacher!! ^^---------------------- >>-------------------------Happy Halloween Teacher Kris!!^^---------------------------
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