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2015-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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A Person You Admire. Who do you admire the most? Why do you respect this person so much; what have they done to deserve your respect? I admire Howard Schultz who is reprsentative starbucks the reson why respect him is related my future I want to do branding about coffee Howard Schultz is most popular person in that feild his marketing strategy always attractive and make positive result I think he can reads consumer's mind those things make me respect him

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Great Monday morning to you! ^^

Hope you had a good time during the last weekend. And I want to thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework given to you. I can see that your writing skill is already improving. Your thoughts are already organize. What we have to do is just to improve simple things like the proper use of prepositions and articles. Anyway, we can improve that as we go on with our lesson.

Have a great day ahead and see you later!


Always,

Kathrine ^^

 


A Person You Admire. Who do you admire the most? Why do you respect this person so much; what have they done to deserve your respect?

I admire Howard Schultz who is reprsentative starbucks

>> I admire Howard Schultz who is  the representative of Starbucks.
 the reson why respect him is related my future

>> The reason why I respect him is because it he is related to my future.
 I want to do branding about coffee

>> I want to make a brand of coffee.
 Howard Schultz is most popular person in that field

>>  Howard Schultz is the most popular person in that field.
 his marketing strategy always attractive and make positive result

>> His marketing strategy always attracts and makes positive result.
 I think he can reads consumer\'s mind

>> I think he can read what is in the mind of the consumers.

>> or; I think he can read the consumers\' thinking.
 those things make me respect him

>> And because of those things,  he gained my respect.


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