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Life is better when you have positive mind.
Although there are many things and situation that make you feel frustrated, if you try to look on the bright side, you can be more encouraged and make your life happier than before.
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Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for your composition! I agree with your answer: Life is better when you have a positive mind! SO let\'s stay positive and always find the silver lining. Take care!
T. JanE ^^
Life is better when you have positive mind.>> Life is better when you have a positive mind. Although there are many things and situation that make you feel frustrated, if you try to look on the bright side, you can be more encouraged and make your life happier than before.
>> Correct
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