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2015-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. The weather is so cold these days. I should be careful not to catch a cold in this season. Anyway, I'm giving a presentation today. Wish me good luck! Would you rather be able to speak fluently every language in the world or be the best in the world at just one language? If my native language is English, it may be enough to speak just one language fluently. However, as a Korean, speaking Korean well is not enough to study my major intensively. Most scholars write their abstracts in English, and giving a presentation in English at an international conference is a matter of course. Therefore, I prefer to speak fluently every language in the world compared to being the best in the world at just one language.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! I would love to feel the cold autumn weather here in my city. I\'m still more biased towards the cold even though it\'s a bit bothersome to do stuff when it\'s cold. Thanks for answering your homework. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! The weather is so cold these days. >> CORRECT! I should be careful not to catch a cold in this season. >> CORRECT! OR >> I should be careful to avoid catching a cold this season.Anyway, I\'m giving a presentation today. >> CORRECT! Wish me good luck! >> CORRECT! If my native language is English, it may be enough to speak just one language fluently. >> CORRECT! However, as a Korean, speaking Korean well is not enough to study my major intensively. >> CORRECT! Most scholars write their abstracts in English, and giving a presentation in English at an international conference is a matter of course. >> CORRECT! OR >> Most scholars write their abstracts in English, therefore, it is important to be able to give a presentation in English at an international conference. Therefore, I prefer to speak fluently every language in the world compared to being the best in the world at just one language. >> CORRECT!

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