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Hi Miss [이름]!
I\'m relieved to know I\'m not the only one confused. ^^
Yes, I agree, pride is sometimes necessary. I think it helps us be aware of our self-worth when something becomes too much to take.
But to be boastful is what is dangerous. Sometimes, when I see someone who appears like a boastful person, I feel annoyed.
But then I realize, being boastful is his problem, not mine. So I just leave it alone.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Miss [이름]!
See you!
Teacher Anne
I am also confused with pride.
>> Correct!
I think that it is good but sometime it is not good to thin of pride\" too much.
>> I think it is good but sometimes, it is not good to think of pride too much.
We need to really know when you should be on pride to other or not..
>> We really need to know if we are full of pride or not.
It doesn\'t mean that we have to throw the pride..just know that when it shoes or not.
>> It doesn\'t mean that we have to throw away our pride. We just need to know if it shows or not.
1. I\'ve tried to make her realize that she\'s wrong, but I can\'t get across to her. ( = convince her)
>> Correct!
2. You can\'t get around ( = avoid) taking this test.
>> Correct!
3. Have all the passengers gotten off ( = disembarked) the train yet?
>> Correct!
4. Fiona got on the bus. ( = boarded the bus)
>> Correct!
5. Fiona got in the car and drove away.
>> Correct!
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