Homework
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Good evening, [이름]!
Happy Monday!
You did a great job once again for submitting your homework today! You have well constructed ideas and you just need to polish your grammar skills!
I agree with your ideas and I think it is a good one!
Be careful not to eat much as well!
See you later!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you could get one gift for everyone in your family, regardless of the cost, what would you get them and why? Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences.
If I can get one gift for my family, regardless of the cost, I wil get my own house.
>> If I can get one gift for my family, regardless of the cost, I will get my own house.
It\'s because actually I want to get some money, because I want to concentrate on my study only, but sometime money make me to reach the limit.
>>I actually wanted to have money because I want to concentrate on my studies, but sometimes, money has it\'s own limits.
But it\'s too abstractive.
>> It\'s an abstract idea.
So I will get a house, and I will make that house to charter, so that I can earn money little more.
>> So I will get a house and have it for lease so that I can make money out of it.
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Anyway, a moment ago, I ate meal too much.
>> Anyway, I ate too much a few minutes ago.
I feel very full and heavy in a stomach.
>> I feel full and my stomach was very heavy.
Oh my.. Overeating is very bad habit.
>> Oh my... Overeating is a very bad habit.
See you later~
>> Correct!
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