HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
I\'m glad you remembered a beautiful moment. ^^
Suddenly, I want to be a teenager again. So that I can go the beach with my old friends.^^
What did you wish for? Did it come true?
There is really something about the night sky that makes us happy and peaceful.
I hope that you\'ll find time to watch the stars again. ^^
Thanks for sharing a wonderful story!
Teacher Anne
Hi!! It is another happy day.^^
>> Correct!
How are you?
>> Correct!
You were lucky to see a shooting star last night?
>> You were lucky to have seen a shooting star last night!
I don\'t remember when I see stars..hehe
>> I don\'t remember the last time I saw the stars.
I am kinda busy so forget to see the small beautiful things...
>> I am kind of busy so I forget the small and beautiful things.
I have seen a shooting star once..I was in high school and had a graduation trip..
>> Correct!
I went to the beach in Gang won do which is country side and has good beaches..
>> I went to the beach in Gang won do which is in the countryside and it has good beaches.
My friends and I lied down on the sea shore and looked at the night skies..
>> My friends and I lay down on the seashore and looked at the night sky.
It was beautiful. Luckily we saw the shooting star and wished to pass the test..hehe
>> Correct!
Thanks so much for bringing this good memory to me..*^^*
>> Correct!
1. We passed by your house the other day.
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2. Hey, would you like to come over next Thursday?
>> Correct!
3. I was out very late last night and didn\'t get in until 4 AM.
>> Correct!
4. The police let the thief slip through their fingers at the last moment.
>> Correct!
5. Maria has never fit in with the crowd. She has always been a rebel.
>> Correct!
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