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2015-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi!! It is another happy day.^^ How are you? You were lucky to see a shooting star last night? I don't remember when I see stars..hehe I am kinda busy so forget to see the small beautiful things... I have seen a shooting star once..I was in high school and had a graduation trip.. I went to the beach in Gang won do which is country side and has good beaches.. My friends and I lied down on the sea shore and looked at the night skies.. It was beautiful. Luckily we saw the shooting star and wished to pass the test..hehe Thanks so much for bringing this good memory to me..*^^* 1. We passed by your house the other day. 2. Hey, would you like to come over next Thursday? 3. I was out very late last night and didn't get in until 4 AM. 4. The police let the thief slip through their fingers at the last moment. 5. Maria has never fit in with the crowd. She has always been a rebel.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!

I\'m glad you remembered a beautiful moment. ^^

Suddenly, I want to be a teenager again. So that I can go the beach with my old friends.^^

What did you wish for? Did it come true?

There is really something about the night sky that makes us happy and peaceful.

I hope that you\'ll find time to watch the stars again. ^^

Thanks for sharing a wonderful story!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi!! It is another happy day.^^

>> Correct!
How are you?

>> Correct!
You were lucky to see a shooting star last night?

>> You were lucky to have seen a shooting star last night!
I don\'t remember when I see stars..hehe

>> I don\'t remember the last time I saw the stars.
I am kinda busy so forget to see the small beautiful things...

>> I am kind of busy so I forget the small and beautiful things.
I have seen a shooting star once..I was in high school and had a graduation trip..

>> Correct!
I went to the beach in Gang won do which is country side and has good beaches..

>> I went to the beach in Gang won do which is in the countryside and it has good beaches.
My friends and I lied down on the sea shore and looked at the night skies..

>> My friends and I lay down on the seashore and looked at the night sky.
It was beautiful. Luckily we saw the shooting star and wished to pass the test..hehe

>> Correct!
Thanks so much for bringing this good memory to me..*^^*
>> Correct!
1. We passed by your house the other day.

>> Correct!
2. Hey, would you like to come over next Thursday?

>> Correct!
3. I was out very late last night and didn\'t get in until 4 AM.

>> Correct!
4. The police let the thief slip through their fingers at the last moment.

>> Correct!
5. Maria has never fit in with the crowd. She has always been a rebel.

>> Correct!

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