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Hello, Miss [이름]!
Indeed! Difficult circumstances can really change us into something.
And the important thing is that we learned from them. It may be difficult to let go of some people, and it is often painful.
But we all need to be brave enough and live another day.
I bet if you were to meet the girl that you were in middle school, you\'d be surprised how you\'ve changed. ^^
Stay strong and happy, Miss [이름]!
See you later!
Teacher Anne
Thanks for listening my story all the time!!
>> Thanks for listening to my stories all the time!
It was the bigest issue until I have been living..and I realized and learned many things though it.
>> It was the biggest issue that I have gone through. And I realized and learned many things through it.
It is hard to change something for us forever but I must be changed the attitude in order to be a teacher.
>> It is hard to change something forever, but I had to change my attitude in order to be a teacher.
I was a just normal girl who liked to do what I wanted.
>> Correct!
also I was too shy to be infront of the crowd.
>> I was also too shy to be in front of the crowd.
However, I can sureIy say that I am totally changed them by the job..
>> However, I can surely say that I am now totally changed because of my job.
I had really hard time when I worked as a kindergarten teacher
>> I really had a hard time when I worked as a kindergarten teacher.
but through this, I am really thankful for making me a better person. *^^*
>> But through it all, I am really thankful for the circumstances that made me a better person.
1. If his nose were smaller, he would be very handsome.
>> Correct!
2. I would come if I hada car.
>> Correct! [ had a]
3. If she knew, she would tell him.
>> Correct!
4. If his parents didn\'t give him money, he wouldn\'t go out so much.
>> Correct!
5. If she didn\'t believe me, she would have told me.
>> Correct!
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