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2015-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The police officer made him pay a five-dollar bill.(e) 2. Mary's husband bought her a three-carat diamond ring. (b) 3. Her brother married a twenty-year-old girl.(c) 4. The teacher set up a hundred-question test.(a) 5. He lent me a hundred-dollar fine.(d) I am going to visit one of my company's factories. I have to work in field for education. Also I have to stand while working So I am nervous because my waist is very weak. Maybe tomorrow, I can't attend your class because I will feel very tired but I will try to attend your class.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Impressive!  Some reminders:   Notice the word \'fine\'. It means a sum of money exacted as a penalty by a court of law or other authority. example: \"a parking fine\"   Teacher Venus^^   1. The police officer made him pay a five-dollar bill.(e) >>>The police officer made him pay a hundred-dollar fine. 2. Mary\'s husband bought her a three-carat diamond ring. (b) >>>CORRECT   3. Her brother married a twenty-year-old girl.(c) >>>CORRECT 4. The teacher set up a hundred-question test.(a) >>>CORRECT 5. He lent me a hundred-dollar fine.(d)>>>He lent me a five-dollar bill. I am going to visit one of my company\'s factories. >>>CORRECT I have to work in field for education. >>>I have to work in the field for my education. Also I have to stand while working >>>Also I have to stand while working. So I am nervous because my waist is very weak. >>>CORRECT Maybe tomorrow, I can\'t attend your class because I will feel very tired but I will try to attend your class. >>>CORRECT

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