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Knowledge gained from personal experience is more important than knowledge gained from classroom. We learn same thing in the classroom such as English, math, science etc. However, if we travel, we can broaden our horizons because we can get a lot of new ideas from experience. It is special knowledge that we can't learn from school.
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Hi there Adam!
I totally agree with you that experience is the best teacher!
Knowledge gained from personal experience is more important than knowledge gained from classroom.
>>CORRECT!
We learn same thing in the classroom such as English, math, science etc.
>>We learn the same thing in the classroom such as English, Math, Science etc.
However, if we travel, we can broaden our horizons because we can get a lot of new ideas from experience.
>>CORRECT!
It is special knowledge that we can\'t learn from school.
>>It is a special knowledge that we can\'t learn from school.
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