Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
What is the best solution for my son's education?
These days, I have many worries about my son.
The climate here in Korea is too competitive. T.T
Anyway, I should wait until my son could study by himself.
Would you rather change one thing in the past or be able to see into the future?
I have the choice which I'd like to change.
I had decided to remain here in Korea with my son when my husband left Korea to Thailand because of his job 10 years ago.
Back in those days, I was working as an office worker, so I couldn't forgive my job.
However, my son couldn't often meet his father due to my choice until my son became 5 years old.
I feel sorry that my son doesn't have many memories of his father in that period.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! You\'re a smart and independent woman. You are very practical. I\'m sure you can think of a better solution to this problem.
Good luck!
Thanks for dropping by to do your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!What is the best solution for my son\'s education?
>> CORRECT!These days, I have many worries about my son.
>> CORRECT!The climate here in Korea is too competitive. T.T
>> The Korean society is too competitive.
OR >> Koreans are too competitive.
Anyway, I should wait until my son could study by himself.
>> CORRECT!I have the choice which I\'d like to change.
>> I would choose the change something in the past.I had decided to remain here in Korea with my son when my husband left Korea to Thailand because of his job 10 years ago.
>> I had decided to remain here in Korea with my son when my husband left for Thailand, because of his job, 10 years ago.Back in those days, I was working as an office worker, so I couldn\'t forgive my job.
>> Back then, I was an office worker so I couldn\'t leave my job.However, my son couldn\'t often meet his father due to my choice until my son became 5 years old.
>> However, my son couldn\'t see his father until he was 5 years old due to my choice I feel sorry that my son doesn\'t have many memories of his father in that period.
>> CORRECT!
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