Homework

2015-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences your opinion about global warming. Global warming is one of the severe problems in the earth. Every year, the sea level getting higher, the weather is more hotter and colder than before. Many animals faced on extinction. It is very severe to people too. I'm worry about it every year. -- Anyway, as I told you before, I already voted on number 23. I tried to find you and matched the picutre of your profile between haloween pictures. I hope I chose you. T T See you!!

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Good evening, [이름]! I agree with everything that you have said. I believe that we should always protect our environment to have a better future. Thank you for always doing your best to answer your homework. You did a good job! Keep it up! So, let us also help our environment by doing acts of kindness everywhere. See you tomorrow! Thank you for also visiting our website and voting for the teacher of your choice! kkk~ I cannot tell you if that\'s my entry yet but thank you so much!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences your opinion about global warming.Global warming is one of the severe problems in the earth. >> Global warming is one of the severe problems on earth.   Every year, the sea level getting higher, the weather is more hotter and colder than before. >>Every year, the sea level is getting higher and the temperature is getting hotter or colder than before.   Many animals faced on extinction. >> Many animals face extinction.   It is very severe to people too. >> It is a severe problem to humans too.   I\'m worry about it every year. >> I worry about it every year. --Anyway, as I told you before, I already voted on number 23. >> Anyway, as I told you before, I already voted for number 23.   I tried to find you and matched the picutre of your profile between haloween pictures. >> I tried to find you and match your picture from your profile with the Halloween pictures.   I hope I chose you. T T >> I hope that I chose your picture. T T See you!! >> Correct!

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