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2015-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher. Instead of today's writing topic, I did my homework about one of the last weekend's. It's because I couldn't come up with some idea about this topic. Please, forgive me. ^^ Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms about life/lifestyle: 1. keep up with the Joneses 2. keep the wolf from the door 3. live from hand to mouth 1. I think my son needs to keep up with the Joneses. But, he doesn't have a strong sense of rivalry. So, comparison with his friends won't be a good way to motivate him. 2. It is argued that political stability is guaranteed by having wide middle-class. If many people keep the wolf from the door, social harmony can be threatened. 3. We should pay close attention to the number of increasing non-regular workers, who live from hand to mouth.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Great job! ^^ Keep up the good work. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT! Instead of today\'s writing topic, I did my homework about one of the last weekend\'s. >> Instead of our writing topic today, I did one of my homework from last week. It\'s because I couldn\'t come up with some idea about this topic. >> CORRECT! Please, forgive me. ^^ >> CORRECT! 1. I think my son needs to keep up with the Joneses. >> CORRECT! But, he doesn\'t have a strong sense of rivalry. >> But he is not very competitive. So, comparison with his friends won\'t be a good way to motivate him. >> So comparing him with his friends is not a good way to motivate him.2. It is argued that political stability is guaranteed by having a wide middle-class. >> CORRECT! If many people keep the wolf from the door, social harmony can be threatened. >> CORRECT! >> might3. We should pay close attention to the number of increasing non-regular workers, who live from hand to mouth. >> CORRECT!

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