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Hello, Miss [이름]!
The world seems bleak sometimes, but I\'m happy that you stay positive and happy through it all.
Sometimes, people are really much more comfortable in pretending they do not care. And it is really sad.
Others learn not to care because they have been hurt before.
Either their trust was broken by someone they really care for or they just have a broken heart.
So, I believe it takes a lot of strength to choose to be happy and to care when no one seems to .
In my eyes, happy people like you are full of strength. ^^
Stay strong and kind!
Teacher Anne
Hi!!*^^* It is a happy day THURSDAY for me!!*^^*
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Nowadays, people really cares about themselves too much
>> Nowadays, people really care about themselves too much,
but I partly agree that we are getting selfish but I more agree with being individualistic
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because people just don\'t mind what happends with others even a person would die beside them,
>> because people just don\'t mind what happens to thers even if a person were to die beside them.
most people will think how much it would bother them...It is too sad..
>> Most people will think about how much it would bother them... It is too sad.
People don\'t want to be bothered and also interupt to others.
>> People don\'t want to be bothered and being interrupted by others.
However, there are some good people who still get along with others..
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That is why, we can live happily..^^
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1. I usually listen to rock music.
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2. P1: What is she doing?
P2:She is listening to music.
>> Correct!
3. My professor always speaks very slowly.
>> Correct!
4. P1: What are you doing tonight?
P2: We are going to see a movie.
>> Correct!
5. He normally drives very fast.
>> Correct!
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