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2015-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi!! Thanks for having a good conversation with me..^^ I thought that I could arrive at the hospital before the class...but..there were so many cars at the parking lot. I am sorry and thanks. I also saw the picture..I want to read the articles but I am runing of my time.. I have a class so I need to leave the car soon...maybe I will try to read it tonight. hehe The sculpture of Queen Elizabeth dosen't look like her.. Who is the artist? I will check it later..In fact, I am not into the art.. It sounds boring and difficult when I hear the word "ART" Nevertheless, I should have studied about some artists like Pablo Picasso Vincent van Gogh and so on because it was neccessary to teach the kids about the art at the school. It was a hell to me.^^; I am so sorry that I cant tell you about this more..^^: 1. She told me her name. (tell) 2. I saw him yesterday. (see) 3. My brother called me last night. (call) 4. I wanted to speak to my teacher. (want) 5. My parents gave me a present. (give

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I understand how you feel. It is very difficult to understand art. ^^

Sometimes, when I look at a painting, I really don\'t know what to make of it. ^^

The artist was from China. I forgot his name too. But apparently, he is a big fan of the Queen Mother.

Van Gogh has an interesting but depressing life story. But I like his paintings compared to the modern ones we see today.

Good luck with your art class! Haha! ^^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ^^

See you on Monday, Miss [이름]!

Teacher Anne

 

Hi!! Thanks for having a good conversation with me..^^

>> Correct!
I thought that I could arrive at the hospital before the class...

>> Correct!

but..there were so many cars at the parking lot. I am sorry and thanks.

>> Correct!
I also saw the picture..

>> Correct!

I want to read the articles but I am runing of my time..

>> I want to read the articles but I am running out of time.
I have a class so I need to leave the car soon...maybe I will try to read it tonight.

>> Correct!
hehe The sculpture of Queen Elizabeth dosen\'t look like her..

>> Correct! [doesn\'t]
Who is the artist? I will check it later..In fact, I am not into the art..

>> Correct!
It sounds boring and difficult when I hear the word \"ART\"

>> Correct!
Nevertheless, I should have studied about some artists like Pablo Picasso Vincent van Gogh and so on

>> Correct!

because it was neccessary to teach the kids about the art at the school.

>> because it was necessary to teach kids about art at the school where I teach.

 It was a hell to me.^^;

>> Correct!

I am so sorry that I cant tell you about this more..^^:

>> I am so sorry that I can\'t tell you more about this topic. ^^;
1. She told me her name. (tell)

>> Correct!
2. I saw him yesterday. (see)

>> Correct!
3. My brother called me last night. (call)

>> Correct!
4. I wanted to speak to my teacher. (want)

>> Correct!
5. My parents gave me a present. (give)

>> Correct!

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