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2015-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Essay: Answer the questions in not more than 5 sentences. When was the last time you were stressed? How did you manage your stress? I was stressed at midterm. The period of the exam was too long, it made me very tired and uncomfortable. But at the period of the exam, I ate food a lot, like meal, rice, polk, chicken, spagetti, bread, ice cream.. and so on. Foods make me always happy. (It causes me gain some weight. I need to lose some weight, but I can't give up to eating food.. kk) -- I'm very sorry for yesterday. I was so tired and need some rest so I got asleep early. I'm very sorry. T T Anyway I have many episode today! Talk to you later.

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Happy Friday, [이름]! ^^ I totally understand that you had a rough day yesterday. I know that you needed to take a rest and relax for a bit. The exams made you exhausted and you must take some time to sleep. I hope you regained your energy. Thank you for answering your homework as well. You did good but don\'t stop aiming for the best! See you later! I miss you!!   Teacher Carmen ^_^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay: Answer the questions in not more than 5 sentences.When was the last time you were stressed? How did you manage your stress?I was stressed at midterm. >> I was stressed during my midterm exams.   The period of the exam was too long, it made me very tired and uncomfortable. >> The duration of the exam was too long and it made me very tired and uncomfortable.   But at the period of the exam, I ate food a lot, like meal, rice, polk, chicken, spagetti, bread, ice cream.. and so on. >> But during those days, I ate a lot of food like rice, pork, chicken, spaghetti, bread, ice cream and so on.   Foods make me always happy. >> Food always makes me happy.   (It causes me gain some weight. I need to lose some weight, but I can\'t give up to eating food.. kk)>> It can make me gain some weight. I need to lose weight but I don\'t want to give up eating food. kk)--I\'m very sorry for yesterday. >> I\'m very sorry about yesterday.   I was so tired and need some rest so I got asleep early. >> I was so tired that I need to get some rest so I fell asleep early.   I\'m very sorry. T T >> Correct! Anyway I have many episode today! >> Anyway, I have a lot of stories to share today!   Talk to you later. >>Correct!

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