homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Charlie~!
It is too late night~.. I'm sorry to submit late.
If I can communicate with animals I would like to know their idea about their life such as environment and satisfaction of life.
Especially I really love dog because the dog is the nearest pet with human and the cutest of all animals. But what I've often seen many cases of abandoned dog and animal abuse on media made me want to know about dog's mind. Even though they got terrible experiences from the people they greeted their owner again. Sometimes that seems like foolish and pitiful. So if I have a chance to communicate with animals I would try to talk to dogs first about what they have in mind about human.
강사 첨삭
Hey there [이름]! ^^
It\'s alright, don\'t worry about submitting it late. No worries. ~~
Thank you for answering our homework topic and yes, I agree with your answer about dogs being the cutest. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
It is too late night~.. I\'m sorry to submit late.
>> It already quite late ~.. I\'m sorry for submitting at the last minute.
If I can communicate with animals I would like to know their idea about their life such as environment and satisfaction of life.Especially I really love dog because the dog is the nearest pet with human and the cutest of all animals.
>> If I can communicate with animals, I would like to know their thoughts about their lives such as their environment and how satisfied they are. I especially want to communicate with dogs because I love them and I think they are the cutest among the animals and man\'s best friend.
But what I\'ve often seen many cases of abandoned dog and animal abuse on media made me want to know about dog\'s mind. Even though they got terrible experiences from the people they greeted their owner again. Sometimes that seems like foolish and pitiful.
>> However, I\'ve often seen many cases of abandoned dogs and animal abuse on the news and it made me want to know what do dogs think about this. Even though they go through terrible experiences from people, they remain loyal to their owners although, sometimes, it may seem foolish and pitiful.
So if I have a chance to communicate with animals I would try to talk to dogs first about what they have in mind about human
>> So if I had a chance to communicate with animals, I would talk to dogs first to know what they have in mind about humans.
It\'s alright, don\'t worry about submitting it late. No worries. ~~
Thank you for answering our homework topic and yes, I agree with your answer about dogs being the cutest. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
It is too late night~.. I\'m sorry to submit late.
>> It already quite late ~.. I\'m sorry for submitting at the last minute.
If I can communicate with animals I would like to know their idea about their life such as environment and satisfaction of life.Especially I really love dog because the dog is the nearest pet with human and the cutest of all animals.
>> If I can communicate with animals, I would like to know their thoughts about their lives such as their environment and how satisfied they are. I especially want to communicate with dogs because I love them and I think they are the cutest among the animals and man\'s best friend.
But what I\'ve often seen many cases of abandoned dog and animal abuse on media made me want to know about dog\'s mind. Even though they got terrible experiences from the people they greeted their owner again. Sometimes that seems like foolish and pitiful.
>> However, I\'ve often seen many cases of abandoned dogs and animal abuse on the news and it made me want to know what do dogs think about this. Even though they go through terrible experiences from people, they remain loyal to their owners although, sometimes, it may seem foolish and pitiful.
So if I have a chance to communicate with animals I would try to talk to dogs first about what they have in mind about human
>> So if I had a chance to communicate with animals, I would talk to dogs first to know what they have in mind about humans.
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