Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It is raining now here in Seoul.
According to the weather forecast, it would rain until tomorrow.
See you on rainy Monday!^^
Would you rather be super fast or super strong? Why?
I would like to rather be super fast.
In my opinion, this era is asking us for being fast rather than being strong.
These days, the sources of power are getting diversifying.
This means that being strong is not the only source of power any more.
Today, we are living in the information-oriented society.
In order to adjust to this situation, we need to respond to everything quickly.
Therefore, I think being fast would be advantageous to strive through new waves.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! We had the opposite weather here in my city. It was not hot, it was boiling! The sun shone brightly all weekend.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! It is raining now here in Seoul.
>> CORRECT! According to the weather forecast, it would rain until tomorrow.
>> CORRECT! See you on a rainy Monday!^^>> CORRECT!
I would like to rather be super fast.
>> I would rather be super fast.In my opinion, this era is asking us for being fast rather than being strong.
>> In my opinion, this era is asking us to be fast rather than be strong.These days, the sources of power are getting diversifying.>> These days, the source of power is diversified.
This means that being strong is not the only source of power any more.
>> CORRECT! Today, we are living in the information-oriented society.
>> CORRECT! In order to adjust to this situation, we need to respond to everything quickly.
>> CORRECT! Therefore, I think being fast would be advantageous to strive through new waves.
>> Therefore, I think being fast would be more advantageous to strive through these new waves.
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