Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
In class today, I didn't catch your question about registering for a class.
I'm sorry. ^^
Of course, I will register for a class again.
During my absence in January next year, I can use the long-term postpone.
I really want to speak you again after improving my English skill there.
Anyway, good luck to me.
Water or food: which one can't you live without? Why?
Both are necessary to live.
However, food would be the better choice to prolong my life.
In general, food is having some water, so I can absorb water through some food.
Of course, there is obviously a limit to stand.
But, if I don't eat any food, but water, I couldn't get calories which need to physical activity.
Without calorie intake, we will not be able to live long.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thank you for deciding to continue your English studies with me. :) I\'m delighted to hear that!
I checked your homework below. Please review it.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! In class today, I didn\'t catch your question about registering for a class.
>> CORRECT! I\'m sorry. ^^
>> CORRECT! Of course, I will register for a class again.
>> CORRECT!
>> ourDuring my absence in January next year, I can use the long-term postpone.
>> CORRECT! I really want to speak you again after improving my English skill there.
>> I really want to speak with you again after improving my English skills there.Anyway, good luck to me.
>> CORRECT! Both are necessary to live.
>> CORRECT! However, food would be the better choice to prolong my life.
>> CORRECT! In general, food is having some water, so I can absorb water through some food.
>> In general, some food have water, so I can absorb it through them.
Of course, there is obviously a limit to stand.
>> Of course, there is obviously a limitation.But, if I don\'t eat any food, but water, I couldn\'t get calories which need to physical activity.
>> But if I don\'t eat any food, and just drink water, I couldn\'t get the calories that I need to gain energy for physical activities.
Without calorie intake, we will not be able to live long.
>> CORRECT!
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