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2015-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I've ever thought that if I have a chance to go past I would like to be when I lived with my grand parents in university. When I was university student I lived in my grand parents since their house was near. However I was usually not close with them while I was growing up. That was hard to change in a day. So I didn't spent lots of time communicating in house. As time passes by, I made an lame excuse for not solving it as saying busy. After all my grand father passed away when I was senior year. After graduation of university I've been closer with my grand mother. Later I noticed everything is what I make of it. Whenever I have time to recall memory or experience what I want to go back I remember this bitter experience.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^   Thank you for answering last Friday\'s topic! ~ Yes, we all have past regrets that we would like to change now but we only have the present and the future so we should make the most of it. ^^   See you later!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I\'ve ever thought that if I have a chance to go past I would like to be when I lived with my grand parents in university. >> I\'ve always thought that if I ever have a chance to go back in time, I would like to go back to when I was in university while living with my grandparents. When I was university student I lived in my grand parents since their house was near. However I was usually not close with them while I was growing up. That was hard to change in a day. So I didn\'t spent lots of time communicating in house.As time passes by, I made an lame excuse for not solving it as saying busy. >> When I was a university student, I lived with my grandparents since their house was nearby. However, I wasn\'t close to them while I  was growing up and I found it hard to change that so I didn\'t spend a lot of time in the house and I made lame excuses, saying that I was busy. After all my grand father passed away when I was senior year. After graduation of university I\'ve been closer with my grand mother. Later I noticed everything is what I make of it. Whenever I have time to recall memory or experience what I want to go back I remember this bitter experience. >> My grandfather passed away when I was in senior year and after my university graduation, I\'ve become closer to my grandmother. I learned too late that everything is what I make of it and whenever I remember a memory or experience I would like to change in the past, I recall this bitter experience.

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