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2015-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello!*^^* It is always to have our class..It makes me alive everyday..*^^* Thank you so much. If I could give advice to [이름] in the past, I want to say "You are good enough! Be confident and love yourself more..." I remembered that I think I didn't love myself..I thought I was ugly and didn't have any good talent...I did not have confidence at that time... For now..I reliazed that I really made a big mistake to myself.. I should love myself then I can love others.. That is so simple for now but it was really hard to accept this.. 1. The airport that is being built will be the largest in the country. 2. The woman who sang that song is very beautiful. 3. People who use this site will learn English very quickly. 4. The computer that I want to buy costs $1,000. 5. The dinner that your mother prepared was delicious.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]! Happy Birthday! *^^* That\'s one very good advice you wrote. ^^ I understand how you felt before.  They say our harshest critics are also ourselves. But I\'m glad that now you have learned to love yourself. ^^ There may still be days when you feel you are not good enough, but remember that in the eyes of those who love and care for you, you are a blessing. *^^* It\'s your birthday so celebrate and enjoy the life that is given to you! ^^ See you later! Teacher Anne   It is always to have our class.. >> It is always nice to have our class. It makes me alive everyday..*^^* >> It makes me feel alive everyday. *^^* Thank you so much. >> Correct!If I could give advice to [이름] in the past, I want to say \"You are good enough! Be confident and love yourself more...\" >> Correct!I remembered that I think I didn\'t love myself.. >> Correct! I thought I was ugly and didn\'t have any good talent... >> Correct! I did not have confidence at that time... >> Correct!For now..I reliazed that I really made a big mistake to myself.. >> Correct! [realized]I should love myself then I can love others.. >> Correct! >> I should love myself so I can love others.That is so simple for now but it was really hard to accept this.. >> Correct!>> It is so simple now that I think of it, but was really hard for me to accept it back then.1. The airport that is being built will be the largest in the country. >> Correct!2. The woman who sang that song is very beautiful. >> Correct!3. People who use this site will learn English very quickly. >> Correct!4. The computer that I want to buy costs $1,000. >> Correct!5. The dinner that your mother prepared was delicious. >> Correct!

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