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Vacation makes people feel better so they can relieve stress. It increases working efficiency so employees do their performances well. Taking time off is very important for people's life. With out rest, we can't do our job well. So I agree on this statement.
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Whew nice one Adam!
How about you?
How often do you take a rest?
Vacation makes people feel better so they can relieve stress.
>>CORRECT!
It increases working efficiency so employees do their performances well.
>>It increases work efficiency so employees perform well.
Taking time off is very important for people\'s life.
>>Taking a time off is very important for people\'s life.
With out rest, we can\'t do our job well. So I agree on this statement.
>>Without rest, we can\'t do our job well, so I agree on this statement.
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