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2015-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Thanks to make my day special.. I had a blast today!!*^^* Sometimes, it is hard to say to help me..even to close friends ans family.. I don't know why it is but it happened.. When I feel that I can ask for a help, I really try to figure out the problems by myself..but I realized if I need some help, it is better to ask.. I am also happy to help my family and friends..if I can.. It is happy thing right? Ex. "He wasn't happy; he was sad." 1. Don't talk so loudly - Talk more quietly. softly 2. I love my new car. I sold my old one. 3. One of his best friends is very rich, but he used to be poor. 4. Do you like big cars or small ones? 5. This towel is wet. Give me a dried one.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I\'m glad your birthday is a great one. *^^*

I agree, we must ask for help when we\'ve done everything in our power and may still find ourselves stuck in the same situation.

But you are right, there is something good in helping others when we can. ^^

I heard today is Pepero Day. Do you know how to make them?

I\'ve seen some in the Philippines and they are great.

Do you like to eat sweet food?

See you later!

Teacher Anne

 

Thanks to make my day special..

>> Thanks for making my day special.
I had a blast today!!*^^*
>> Correct!
Sometimes, it is hard to say to help me..even to close friends ans family..

>> Sometimes, it is hard for me to say, \"Help me,\" even to my close friends and family.
I don\'t know why it is but it happened..

>> I don\'t why but it\'s just the way it is.
When I feel that I can ask for a help, I really try to figure out the problems  by myself..

>> Correct!

but I realized if I need some help, it is better to ask..

>> Correct!
I am also happy to help my family and friends..if I can..

>> Correct!
It is happy thing right?
>> It is a happy thing, right?

1. Don\'t talk so loudly - Talk more quietly/
softly

>> Correct!
2. I love my new car. I sold my old one.

>> Correct!
3. One of his best friends is very rich, but he used to be poor.

>> Correct!
4. Do you like big cars or small ones?

>> Correct!
5. This towel is wet. Give me a dried one.

>> Correct!
>> Give me a dry one.

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