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2015-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, techer. We didn't talk each other today. Tomorrow morning, I will explain the reason why I postponed my class today. See you tomorrow. Would you rather be the smartest person in the world, but no one knows about you or the most popular person in the world, but you're not very smart? Why? I would be the smartest person although no one knows about me. I want to know everything related this world, and prefer to study whatever it is. Unfortunately, I am not that smart even if I have a strong will to study. So, I had to invest relatively much time to acquire knowledges as contrasted with a smart person. I have hoped that I will be smarter than now, because I believe this would enable me to learn everything easily. Being popular doesn't provide any precious value for me whereas being smart can help me enjoy my owen self-satisfied life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework! You did well here. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~   Hello, techer. >> Hello, teacher. We didn\'t talk each other today. >> We didn\'t talk with each other today.Tomorrow morning, I will explain the reason why I postponed my class today. >> CORRECT! See you tomorrow. >> CORRECT! I would be the smartest person although no one knows about me. >> CORRECT! I want to know everything related this world, and prefer to study whatever it is. >> I want to know everything about this world and I prefer to study whatever it is.Unfortunately, I am not that smart even if I have a strong will to study. >> CORRECT! So, I had to invest relatively much time to acquire knowledges as contrasted with a smart person. >> So, unlike smart people, I had to invest more time in acquiring knowledge.I have hoped that I will be smarter than now, because I believe this would enable me to learn everything easily. >> I was hoping to be smarter now because I believe this would enable me to learn everything easily.Being popular doesn\'t provide any precious value for me whereas being smart can help me enjoy my owen self-satisfied life. >> Being popular has no value to me, whereas being smart could help me enjoy my life and be satisfied with it.

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