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2015-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I think this is severe problem especially in korea. Korean is very sensitive to trend like cloths, music, devices. Mane people don't use old devices. These daysM even children are very sensitive to trend. I think this problem is due to their parents. Therefore we should fix these problem.

강사 첨삭

Materialism is surely a problem.

I really hate it when people measure someone\'s capacity by the thing he owns.

Thanks for this Adam!

I think this is severe problem especially in korea.

>>I think this is a severe problem especially in Korea.
Korean is very sensitive to trend like cloths, music, devices.

>>Koreans are very sensitive to trends like clothes, music and devices.

 Mane people don\'t use old devices.

>> Many people don\'t use old devices.

These daysM even children are very sensitive to trend.

>>These days even children are very sensitive to trend.

 I think this problem is due to their parents.

>>CORRECT!

Therefore we should fix these problem.

>>Therefore we should fix this problem.

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