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강사 첨삭
Materialism is surely a problem.
I really hate it when people measure someone\'s capacity by the thing he owns.
Thanks for this Adam!
I think this is severe problem especially in korea.
>>I think this is a severe problem especially in Korea.
Korean is very sensitive to trend like cloths, music, devices.
>>Koreans are very sensitive to trends like clothes, music and devices.
Mane people don\'t use old devices.
>> Many people don\'t use old devices.
These daysM even children are very sensitive to trend.
>>These days even children are very sensitive to trend.
I think this problem is due to their parents.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore we should fix these problem.
>>Therefore we should fix this problem.
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