Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
As you already knew, the Korean SAT is conducted today.
Fortunately, it's not that cold this year, but it usually has been cold at that day.
Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences.
If I were the President of Korea, I would __________.
If I were the President of Korea, I would reinforce the law regarding the right and interests of workers.
The gap between the rich and the poor is one of the big problems facing Korean society today.
I think this has partly resulted from the employment instability since Korean financial crisis in 1998.
Most companies didn't return their company policy even after they already overcame the financial crisis.
It is obvious that Korean society could overcome the financial crisis thanks to numerous workers' sacrifices.
I believe it's time to compensate for their valuable sacrifices.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I guess you feel a bit nostalgic about your own SAT. How long ago was it? ^^
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! As you already knew, the Korean SAT is conducted today.
>> As you already know, the Korean SAT is held today.
Fortunately, it\'s not that cold this year, but it usually has been cold at that day.
>> Fortunately, it\'s not that cold this year, unlike the other years.If I were the President of Korea, I would reinforce the law regarding the right and interests of workers.
>> CORRECT! The gap between the rich and the poor is one of the biggest problems facing Korean society today.
>> CORRECT! I think this has partly resulted from the employment instability since the Korean financial crisis in 1998.
>> CORRECT! Most companies didn\'t return their company policy even after they already overcame the financial crisis.
>> CORRECT! It is obvious that Korean society could overcome the financial crisis thanks to numerous workers\' sacrifices.
>> It is obvious that the Korean society was able to overcome the financial crisis thanks to the sacrifice of numerous workers\'.
I believe it\'s time to compensate them for their valuable sacrifices.
>> CORRECT!
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