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2015-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

I agree on this statement. Poor children should do almost things by theirselves because parents can't back up kids. However rich children have evrything but they lack of voluntary action. It is their drawback. Poor kids prepare hard to achive their goal. As one of the poor kids, I'm sure that they are industrious people.

강사 첨삭

I love this composition, Adam!

I am happy to see new words you have used~

Good job~ Review prepositions in phrasal verbs.

See you~

I agree on this statement.

>>CORRECT!

Poor children should do almost things by theirselves because parents can\'t back up kids.

>>Poor children should do most things by themselves because parents can\'t back them up.

However rich children have evrything but they lack of voluntary action.

>>However rich children have everything but they lack voluntary action.
It is their drawback.

>>CORRECT!

Poor kids prepare hard to achive their goal.

>>Poor kids prepare hard to achieve their goal.

As one of the poor kids, I\'m sure that they are industrious people.

>>CORRECT!

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