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It's a difficult to choose one of both.
But I choose someone plain with a good personality.
Because There is no forever things. Appearance will be disappear soon as time goes. The other way, A good personality is getting more mature as time though. If we could see future what we don't know now, it's smart to choose a good personality.
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Hello [이름]!!!
I do believe that you are determine to enhance your abilities in English. I need to correct you more often so that you should be aware for your mistakes.
See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don\'t pull yourself down I know you can do it!
T. Jeny
>>It\'s difficult to choose one from the 2 choices
But I choose someone plain with a good personality.
But I choose someone plain with a good personality.
>>But I chose someone who is plain and has a good personality.
Because There is no forever things.
Because There is no forever things.
>>Because I don\'t believe in forever.
Appearance will be disappear soon as time goes.
>>As past by, appearance will disappear.
The other way, A good personality is getting more mature as time though.
>>On the other way around, a person who has a good personality will become mature through time.
If we could see future what we don\'t know now, it\'s smart to choose a good personality.
>>In the end we will realize that it is a smart choice to have a good personality.
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