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2015-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

When i was young, my parents is a omnipotent existence to me. I always follow my parents no reason. Now i figure out that they are same person who feel sad and happy. And I also to be a mother, the things that i know that a mother is still a women who is worry and fear. My baby just look at me cozy without any dreadful feeling with sleeping beside me. Anyway, I ask my friends to give a advice for me more than my parents. I don' want to give worry for them. Now, I am to be a adult and parents.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Thank you for your homework, I can see that you are really trying your best to improve your skills in English.
On the other hand, I know that this activity will help you enhance your skills in English.
I was also happy to hear that you were able to enjoy your vacation with your friend. that\'s good!!!
Have fun in learning, [이름]!!!
T. Jeny

When i was young, my parents is a omnipotent existence to me.

>>When I was young, my parents were an omnipotent.
I always follow my parents no reason.

>>I always follow my parents for no reason.
Now i figure out that they are same person who feel sad and happy.

>>Now, I figured out that they are humans, they also fell sad and happy.
And I also to be a mother, the things that i know that a mother is still a women who is worry and fear.

>>As a became a mother, I realized that mothers worry and fear about their children\'s future.
My baby just look at me cozy without any dreadful feeling with sleeping beside me.

>>When I stare at my baby while sleeping, I see an innocent child without any dreadful feelings.
Anyway, I ask my friends to give a advice for me more than my parents.

>>I asked for my friends advice more than my parents.

I don\' want to give worry for them. Now, I am to be a adult and parents.

>>I don\'t want them to worry, now that I am an adult and a parent as well.

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