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학생이 쓴 원문
Family is the only person without any payment to give everything that they have.
We have many things to handle affairs big and small when we are living for.
I got the great power from my family who even if they are in the world.
If i haven't family, how do i live. I can't imagine it.
Family is just itself not a substitution for me.
God give us family to fill love each other.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Doing simple things can really make us happy. I can truly say that you are doing a great job making you and your family happy.
You just have to do what s right and have a big smile on your face.
T. Jeny
>>We can\'t repay our parents for everything they have given and done for us.
We have many things to handle affairs big and small when we are living for.
We have many things to handle affairs big and small when we are living for.
>>We have many affairs to handle in life may it be big and small.
I got the great power from my family who even if they are in the world.
I got the great power from my family who even if they are in the world.
>>I get great power from my family.
If i haven\'t family, how do i live. I can\'t imagine it.
If i haven\'t family, how do i live. I can\'t imagine it.
>>I can\'t imagine how will I live my life without them.
Family is just itself not a substitution for me.
Family is just itself not a substitution for me.
>>My priority is my family they are not a substitute for me.
God give us family to fill love each other.
God give us family to fill love each other.
>>God gave us our family to fill us with love.
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