homework

2015-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. If you would give respect, you get respect. 2. I will buy a home if I would get my raise. 3. If you were finished on time, we can go the movies. 4. If I have won this race, I would make my parents proud. 5. I would be grateful if you lent me some money.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

 

Please check the corrections that I\'ve made.

I know you can do it next time and you can get a perfect score.:}}

T. Jeny


1. If you would give respect, you get respect.
>>If you give respect, you get respect.
2. I will buy a home if I would get my raise.
>>correct
3. If you were finished on time, we can go the movies.
>> If you finish on time, we can go the movies.
4. If I have won this race, I would make my parents proud.
>>If I won this race, I would make my parents proud.
5. I would be grateful if you lent me some money.
>>correct

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