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If I have a chance to travel anyplace in the world I would like to go to Rome in Italy As I have had interest about arts since I was young, I’ve been looking forward to travel famous places of arts such as museum, temple, and Vatican City since Rome is really well known for art and history. And then I will be exited because I could see all I learned on textbook in class. Furthermore I’ve already heard story of my friends’ experiences about it that was enormous and wonderful so many times. So I’m really want to go to Rome when I have a chance to travel

Hello [이름]! ^^   Good work in writing about where you would go if you could travel free anywhere in the world. Italy is a great place to learn art but don\'t forget France as well. ~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   If I have a chance to travel anyplace in the world I would like to go to Rome in Italy >> If I could travel anyplace in the world, I would go to Rome in Italy. As I have had interest about arts since I was young, I’ve been looking forward to travel famous places of arts such as museum, temple, and Vatican City since Rome is really well known for art and history. And then I will be exited because I could see all I learned on textbook in class. >> Since I have had an interest in arts eversince I was young, I\'ve been wanting to travel to famous art places such as museums, temples, the Vatican city because Rome is well known for it\'s art and history. I would also feel excited because I would be able to see everything I\'ve learned in textbooks in school.   Furthermore I’ve already heard story of my friends’ experiences about it that was enormous and wonderful so many times. So I’m really want to go to Rome when I have a chance to travel >> Furthermore, I have heard my friend\'s stories about their experiences so many times on how big and wonderful everything was so I would really go to Rome when I get the chance to travel.