Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
We are going to my mother-in-law's house because my husband didn't visit the hospital when she was in the hospital.
We'll probably have dinner together.
Have a nice weekend! ^^
Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences.
If I were to choose between radio and television, I would choose _____, because ______.
If this choice is for my free time, I would choose television, because it' much more fun and diverse.
These days, IP TV has come into wide use in Korea.
This not only provides us various channels such as news, sports and documentaries but also enable us to enjoy various films at home.
Only if I choose television, I could have various option to enjoy my free time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m a couch potato, but I would choose the radio in this situation. I feel like listening to music is way better than just watching TV all day. ^^
Please review my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! We are going to my mother-in-law\'s house because my husband didn\'t visit the hospital when she was in the hospital.
>> We are going to my mother-in-law\'s house because my husband didn\'t visit her when she was in the hospital.
We\'ll probably have dinner together.
>> CORRECT! Have a nice weekend! ^^
>> CORRECT! If this choice is for my free time, I would choose television, because it\' much more fun and diverse.
>> If this is a choice for my free time, I would choose television because it\'s much more fun and diverse.
These days, IP TV has come into wide use in Korea.
>> These days, IP TV is widely used in Korea.This not only provides us various channels such as news, sports and documentaries but also enable us to enjoy various films at home.
>> This not only provides us with various channels such as news, sports and documentaries, but also enables us to enjoy various films at home.
Only if I choose television, I could have various option to enjoy my free time.
>> If I choose television, I could have various options to enjoy my free time.
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