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강사 첨삭
Wow Adam!
The number of mistakes is decreasing ;)
Your opinions and word choice are noticeably improving!
They have impact on people\'s belief because information from media is quite reliable.
>>They have an impact on people\'s belief because the information from media is quite reliable.
We get a lot of topics from media.
>>CORRECT!
Adults can\'t have a conversation without watching media because they always talk about social issues.
>>Adults can\'t have a conversation without watching it because they always talk about social issues.
Also these days young people should read newspaper in order to perpare job interview.
>> Also, these days, young people should read newspaper in order to prepare for job interview.
It plays a key role in everyday life.
>>CORRECT!
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