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2015-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. It's Monday morning again. I hope you have a great week. Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences. If I were an animal, I would be a/an _____, because _______. I seriously want to remain as a human being, but if I have to choose one of animals, I would be a bird. The reason why I choose to be a migratory bird is because I guess migratory birds are relatively free compared to the other animals such as pigs, sheep and horses. It is true than animals are subordinate to human beings, and I don't want to be subjugated by anything.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'ve thought of becoming a bird too, however, I feel like my personality suits a panda more. All I do is sleep, eat and lie down all day. Haha! Have a delightful day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s Monday morning again. >> CORRECT! I hope you have a great week. >> CORRECT! I seriously want to remain as a human being, but if I have to choose one of animals, I would be a bird. >> I seriously want to remain human, but if I have to choose one animal, I would choose a bird. The reason why I choose to be a migratory bird is because I guess migratory birds are relatively free compared to the other animals such as pigs, sheep and horses. >> The reason why I choose to be a migratory bird is because migratory birds are relatively free compared to other animals such as pigs, sheep and horses. It is true than animals are subordinate to human beings, and I don\'t want to be subjugated by anything. >> It is true that animals are subordinate to humans, but I don\'t want to be subjugated by anyone.

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