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If I can meet the person from history I would like to meet Yoo Gwan-sun and to ask her something wondering. She is historically one of famous hero in Korea. In early 1990s, many patriots joined in the independence movement against Japanese imperialism. At that time, she led the people for independence movement and made small Korean flag in person for giving crowd. And even she kept to do that and defied Japan when she was in a jail. After all, she passed away because of harsh torture. She was just eight-teen years old when she did the independence movement. What made me think of her is mind of the country and defiance. In those days, women couldn’t social activities in Korea moreover she was too young. So her achievement is really great. By comparison, it will be hard for modern people to do like that. I would like to ask her what she had thought in a jail.

Hello [이름]! ^^   Good job in telling me about which person in history would you like to meet. ^^  I would like to point out the usage of numbers; there is a rule that if the number you are mentioning is ten and below, you spell it out but if it is higher, you use the numerical form. Also, be careful about timelines (1900s vs. 1990s) ^^ You did a good job overall ~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       If I can meet the person from history I would like to meet Yoo Gwan-sun and to ask her something wondering. She is historically one of famous hero in Korea. >> If I could meet one person from history, I would like to meet Yoo Gwan-sun, who is a famous heroine in Korea, to ask her something I\'ve been wondering about.   In early 1990s, many patriots joined in the independence movement against Japanese imperialism. >> In the early 1900s, may patriots joined the independence movement against the Japanese imperialism.   At that time, she led the people for independence movement and made small Korean flag in person for giving crowd. And even she kept to do that and defied Japan when she was in a jail. >> At that time, she led the people in an independence movement, handing out small Korean flags to the people and she kept defying the Japanese rule even when she was imprisoned.    After all, she passed away because of harsh torture. She was just eight-teen years old when she did the independence movement. What made me think of her is mind of the country and defiance. In those days, women couldn’t social activities in Korea moreover she was too young. So her achievement is really great. By comparison, it will be hard for modern people to do like that. I would like to ask her what she had thought in a jail. >> After some time, she passed away because of harsh torture at the age of 18. What made me think of her is her patriotism and her defiance of the Japanese in her young age while even though in those days, Korean women cannot participate in social activism. In comparison to the modern times, her achievement is exceptional. So if I could meet Yoo Gwan-sun, I would ask her what her thoughts were while she was in jail.