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학생이 쓴 원문
My mother is the closest person among my family. We talk about lots of stuffs like my dream, my girl friend, my life etc. Sometimes I am angry with her. However I always love her. She is my motivation. I always study hard because of her.
강사 첨삭
There is no one in the world who can unconditionally love us like our mom^^
Take care of her, you are so lucky you still love her ;)
My mother is the closest person among my family.
>>My mother is the closest person to me among my family members.
We talk about lots of stuffs like my dream, my girl friend, my life etc.
>>We talk about lots of stuffs like my dream, my girlfriend, my life etc.
Sometimes I am angry with her. However I always love her.
>>Sometimes I am angry with her; however I always love her.
She is my motivation.
>>CORRECT!
I always study hard because of her.
>>CORRECT!
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