HOMEWORK

2015-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

I hope that we could achive world peace in the future but I agree with what people think..Even we have arguements with closed people who are our families, friends and so on..That is natural to fight with others...World is big and many different people are in the world..It is really hard to have the same ideas.. 1 - She's been married to her husband for twenty years. 2 - He's married with two kids. 3 - It is similar to mine. 4 - He's interested in music. 5 - She was responsible for the mess.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

It is indeed nearly impossible to achieve world peace.

So, perhaps the best thing we can offer each other is respect and understanding.

But even so it is still difficult.

Every time I remember the commandment, \"Love your  enemies\" I feel guilty because I can\'t do it.

I\'m not trying to be a saint but, sometimes I cannot understand why people do what they do.

For instance, the ISIS are difficult to pray for.

But we shall keep trying. ^^;

Have a great day, Miss [이름]!

 

I hope that we could achive world peace in the future but I agree with what people think..

>> Correct! [achieve]

Even we have arguements with closed people who are our families, friends  and so on..

>> Even common people like us have arguments with those who are close to us (families, friends, and so on).

That is natural to fight with others...World is big and many different people are in the world..

>> It is natural to fight with others. The world is big and many people live in it.

It is really hard to have the same ideas..

>> Correct!
1 -She\'s been married to her husband for twenty years.
>> Correct!
2 - He\'s married with two kids.
>> Correct!
3 - It is similar to mine.
>> Correct!
4 - He\'s interested in music.
>> Correct!
5 - She was responsible for the mess.

>> Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·