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Hello, Miss [이름]!
Sometimes it is really a sad thought when we remember that our time is limited.
But at the same time, it makes everything precious.
Maybe that is why we cry when somebody dies.
Because we realize that his time was limited and we didn\'t make him or her feel our love.
I\'m sorry if this thought makes you sad.
But I hope it won\'t stop you from living your life the best you can. ^^;
See you!
Teacher Anne
\"Carpe Diem\" I have leared when I was in university..
>> Carpe Diem. I have learned that when I was at the university.
It is have to see it.*^^*
>> It\'s nice to hear it again. *^^*
I normally forget that I have a limited life
>> Correct!
but every last day of the year makes me think that I have a limited life
>> Correct!
and I have to plan for my lasted time..
>> and I have to plan for my limited time.
When I think of this, I don\'t feel really happy.
>> When I think of this, I really don\'t feel happy.
It is because I have to think that what I am apart from my precious people..
>> It is because I have to think of what I really am apart from the people preciosu to me.
So..that time I try to think that \"PRESENT is A PRESENT..\"hehe I want to focus on NOW!!!
>> So, at that time, I try to think that the \"PRESENT is A PRESENT\". Hehe I want to focus on NOW!!!
1) I am sixteen years old.
>> Correct!
2) Tommy lives at 107 Pine Lane.
>> Correct!
3) Juana cooks dinner for her family.
>> Correct!
4) They eat lunch at 12:00.
>> Correct!
5) Nina takes medicine when she is sick.
>> Correct!
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