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학생이 쓴 원문
It is an intersting topic..
I would go to the another planet if I am invited..but I wouldn't live there for good..
I don't like to be changed..it would be very interesting however I am sure that I will miss my family and friends...and so on...
1) She wasmy friend in second grade.
2) Mr. [Name] mowed the grass yesterday morning.
3) Vickie and hid the presents before the party.
4) The old cars led the parade last year.
5) Mr. [Name] laid the tile in our old house.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
I agree. There\'s no place like our planet, but sometimes I worry that we are not taking care of it well.
We keep cutting down trees and polluting our planet.
People say it\'s too late, but I hope it\'s not.
Otherwise, the effect would be terrible.
And it also wouldn\'t be so nice if we go to our planet without the people we love. ^^;
Enjoy this day and keep on being happy!
Teacher Anne
It is an intersting topic..
>> Correct! [interesting]I would go to the another planet if I am invited..
>> I would go to another planet if I would be invited.
but I wouldn\'t live there for good..
>> Correct!I don\'t like to be changed..it would be very interesting however I am sure that I will miss my family and friends...and so on...
>> I don\'t want anything to change. It would be interesting, however, I am sure that I will miss my family and friends, and so on.1) She wasmy friend in second grade.
>> Correct! [was my]2) Mr. [Name] mowed the grass yesterday morning.
>> Correct!3) Vickie and hid the presents before the party.
>> Correct!4) The old cars led the parade last year.
>> Correct!5) Mr. [Name] laid the tile in our old house.
>> Correct!
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