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2015-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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It is an intersting topic.. I would go to the another planet if I am invited..but I wouldn't live there for good.. I don't like to be changed..it would be very interesting however I am sure that I will miss my family and friends...and so on... 1) She wasmy friend in second grade. 2) Mr. [Name] mowed the grass yesterday morning. 3) Vickie and hid the presents before the party. 4) The old cars led the parade last year. 5) Mr. [Name] laid the tile in our old house.

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Hi Miss [이름]! I agree. There\'s no place like our planet, but sometimes I worry that we are not taking care of it well. We keep cutting down trees and polluting our planet. People say it\'s too late, but I hope it\'s not. Otherwise, the effect would be terrible. And it also wouldn\'t be so nice if we go to our planet without the people we love. ^^; Enjoy this day and keep on being happy! Teacher Anne   It is an intersting topic.. >> Correct! [interesting]I would go to the another planet if I am invited.. >> I would go to another planet if I would be invited. but I wouldn\'t live there for good.. >> Correct!I don\'t like to be changed..it would be very interesting however I am sure that I will miss my family and friends...and so on... >> I don\'t want anything to change. It would be interesting, however, I am sure that I will miss my family and friends, and so on.1) She wasmy friend in second grade. >> Correct! [was my]2) Mr. [Name] mowed the grass yesterday morning. >> Correct!3) Vickie and hid the presents before the party. >> Correct!4) The old cars led the parade last year. >> Correct!5) Mr. [Name] laid the tile in our old house. >> Correct!

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