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2015-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Yesterday, I registered for our class again. But, we will start our class 30th this month after finishing this class 24th this month. I asked the staff to start next class from 30th this month because I need some time to prepare for my research paper until 27th this month. Please excuse my temporary stop. Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences. My most memorable childhood memory was _______. My most memorable childhood memory was about travelling with my family. My parents both likes traveling all over the country. Thanks to my parents, I made good memories with my family through the travel. This must have affected my way of life, because I consider a family trip as the way of sharing happy moments and memories. But, the problem is that a family trip costs a lot of money.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Don\'t worry about delaying the start of our next class. The important thing is that you registered for our class again. Thank you. :) Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Yesterday, I registered for our class again. >> CORRECT! But, we will start our class 30th this month after finishing this class 24th this month. >> But we will start our class on the 30th of this month, after finishing on the 24th. I asked the staff to start next class from 30th this month because I need some time to prepare for my research paper until 27th this month.>> I asked the staff to start our next class from the 30th of this month because I need some time to prepare for my research paper until the 27th of this month.Please excuse my temporary stop. >> Please excuse me for delaying our class.My most memorable childhood memory was about travelling with my family. >> CORRECT! My parents both likes traveling all over the country. >> My parents both liked traveling around the country.Thanks to my parents, I made good memories with my family through the travel. >> Thanks to my parents, I made good memories with my family through these trips.This must have affected my way of life, because I consider a family trip as the way of sharing happy moments and memories. >> This must have affected my perception in life because I consider a family trip as a way of sharing happy moments and memories.But, the problem is that a family trip costs a lot of money. >> CORRECT!

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