homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]
Thank you for opening my eyes to reality, Our society has a big role for its people.
It\'s very difficult question for me.
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I am thinking about the value of society.
>>correct
Our society supports the needs of people.
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Society makes rules to sustain the life of people.
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Society let people share their role.
>>The society lets people share their role.
Anyway,: society continually doing something going well.
>>any way our society is continuously doing something for welfare.
As we see in this part, there is no reason to say society is losing its values.
>>As we experienced in this part, there is no reason why our society is losing its values.
Because society is always busy to deal with something for people.
>>Because they are doing something for the people.
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