Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
As I told you, I seem to have a slight cold.
I think I should take a rest, but I'm afraid that I have a lot of to read.
Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences.
If I were a superhero, I would be _____, because ______.
If I were a superhero, I would be Iron Man for my son.
My son's dream is to meet Iron Man, and he might take Iron Man's advices well.
After being Iron Man, I would tell my son : "Good boy! Study hard and always mind your parents."
In addition, my son would be very happy if he meets Iron Man in personal.
In sum, this would make my son not only be happy but also be a good boy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Drink plenty of water and take some rest if you can. It might be just a little cold, but you have to prevent it from getting worse.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! As I told you, I seem to have a slight cold.
>> As I told you, I seem to have a little cold.
I think I should take a rest, but I\'m afraid that I have a lot of to read.
>> I think I should take a rest, but I\'m afraid I have a lot of reading to do.If I were a superhero, I would be Iron Man for my son.
>> CORRECT! My son\'s dream is to meet Iron Man, and he might take Iron Man\'s advices well.
>> My son\'s dream is to meet Iron Man so he might take his advice well.
After being Iron Man, I would tell my son : \"Good boy! Study hard and always mind your parents.\"
>> After being Iron Man, I would tell my son, \"Good boy! Study hard and always listen to your parents.\"
In addition, my son would be very happy if he meets Iron Man in personal.
>> Moreover, my son would be very happy if he meets Iron Man in person.In sum, this would make my son not only be happy but also be a good boy.
>> To summarize, this would not only make my son happy, but also turn him into a good boy.
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