Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
It's cloudy today.
The weather seems to be colder than before.
If I don't go out and take a good rest, I would be better tomorrow.
Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences.
If there are 30 hours in one day, I would ________.
If there are 30 hours in one day, I would sleep more than now.
I usually sleep seven or eight hours a day.
You can say that I already sleep enough, but I always want to sleep more than now.
I would sleep two hours more than usual, and I would study my major or play with my son during the rest four hours.
In doing so, I would use the extra six hours productively.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! You and I are like-minded individuals. I also feel like I need a couple more extra hours to sleep. I know that it\'s not very productive, but if I get more rest, then I can do more when I\'m awake.
Thanks for doing your homework!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! It\'s cloudy today.
>> CORRECT! The weather seems to be colder than before.
>> CORRECT! If I don\'t go out and take a good rest, I would be better tomorrow.
>> If I don\'t go out and just take a good rest at home, I would get better tomorrow.If there are 30 hours in one day, I would sleep more than I do now.
>> CORRECT! I usually sleep seven or eight hours a day.
>> CORRECT! You can say that I already sleep enough, but I always want to sleep more than I do now.
>> CORRECT! I would sleep two hours more than usual, and I would study my major or play with my son during the rest four hours.
>> I would sleep two hours more than usual and I would study my major or play with my son during the remaining four hours.In doing so, I would use the extra six hours productively.
>> CORRECT!
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