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2015-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. It's cloudy today. The weather seems to be colder than before. If I don't go out and take a good rest, I would be better tomorrow. Complete the sentence below. Explain your answer in three sentences. If there are 30 hours in one day, I would ________. If there are 30 hours in one day, I would sleep more than now. I usually sleep seven or eight hours a day. You can say that I already sleep enough, but I always want to sleep more than now. I would sleep two hours more than usual, and I would study my major or play with my son during the rest four hours. In doing so, I would use the extra six hours productively.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! You and I are like-minded individuals. I also feel like I need a couple more extra hours to sleep. I know that it\'s not very productive, but if I get more rest, then I can do more when I\'m awake.  Thanks for doing your homework! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s cloudy today. >> CORRECT! The weather seems to be colder than before. >> CORRECT! If I don\'t go out and take a good rest, I would be better tomorrow. >> If I don\'t go out and just take a good rest at home, I would get better tomorrow.If there are 30 hours in one day, I would sleep more than I do now. >> CORRECT! I usually sleep seven or eight hours a day. >> CORRECT! You can say that I already sleep enough, but I always want to sleep more than I do now. >> CORRECT! I would sleep two hours more than usual, and I would study my major or play with my son during the rest four hours. >> I would sleep two hours more than usual and I would study my major or play with my son during the remaining four hours.In doing so, I would use the extra six hours productively. >> CORRECT!

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